Nice, really nice. You should be proud.
An exciting, tense, dramatic story, well drawn and well told.
I was amused that the gangster was arrested at the end (he was, after all, still a violent criminal!)
Well done!
Bravo! Very well done, at the beginning I was thinking to myself that if they truly wanted to provide a positive image to their community then they should've been more ethnically diverse when it came to the Watchdogs, but when it's revealed that Mark himself is a White Supremecist it all made sense. A thoroughly gripping story with fantastic art, will most definitely have to locate the graphic novel.
I've had this bookmarked for the longest, but never got a chance to read it until today. It was a slow day at work, so I read the whole comic. AMAZING. Great story, Great art. just great all Round.
Sweet stuff Im sure they will all be back for multiple sequels as will I
-Posted on May 08, 2007
User: Anonymous
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I enjoyed the writing, very inspiring on it's own. The artwork was quite refreshing, as well as the characters. You guys are great together, like Vegemite and cheese and bread.
Even cooler upon that, was the way you posted it as a full comic. Instead of a part-way teaser.
-Posted on Apr 30, 2007
User: Anonymous
it was interesting, and it did make a good movie. Fight Club, remember? Still, good art and all.
An ending to an interesting if rather simplistic story. It was handled well, considering the sensitive subject area. No one is a saint or a winner.
This comic would make a great movie and I would love to see it redone - fleshing it out and adding a little more background to the characters because I enjoyed the story. You know, what made the other the guy become filled with such hate in his heart towards people of color? Surely it is more than just living in a crime ridden neighborhood. And the protagonist, what makes him not fall in with the "haters"? He could have so easily figured crime and struggle for white people = colored people running amok due to self appreciating liberals, and said colored people needing some hard and forced submission.
Really bloody good! I found the entire story intruiging and very with a very interesting twist! Are there any more of comics like this that you have worked on?
Really bloody good! I found the entire story intruiging and very with a very interesting twist! Are there any more of comics like this that you have worked on?
well. that was one story full of wonderfully nasty twists. Good work there. Interestingly, my only problem with the plot was at the very beginning. Hard to believe anyone could get that suckered into buying a house in a neighborhood like that. But the rest help up so well I was able to let that go...
I'm running a vigilante story too right now. But it's very different.
I enjoyed the writing, very inspiring on it's own. The artwork was quite refreshing, as well as the characters. You guys are great together, like Vegemite and cheese and bread.
