| | User: Nintendude | | | | wait, your making this page awful just for fun? -Posted on Apr 02, 2007 | | User: comic preps | | | my comic is awsome u lot dont know nothing about comics so sthu noobs!!!!!
just because i only make comics to take the piss out of u lot hu do this for fun :D -Posted on Feb 26, 2007 | | User: Emerald | | | | While on the subject of graphics. Don't mix SIDESCROLLING and OVERWORLD. -Posted on Feb 08, 2007 | | User: adaman23 | | 1 | -Posted on Feb 07, 2007 | | User: BaronPedro | | 2 | I'm sorry, but.. wheres the humor? The punchline? Anything? The graphics are OK, but Marios hands are transparent, which is just plain inexcusable..
Sorry to be so critical, but you have a lot of work to do here. -Posted on Feb 07, 2007 | | User: Rydel6 | | | | Good luck on the next one... -Posted on Feb 07, 2007 | | User: Nktakumi | | | This comic is to early to rate it already but i give some advice.
1. Read Will's basic MS paint sprite comic Tutorial
2. Speech Ballons will improve your comic.
3. Bigger Panels
4. Grammar Fix.
5. Mario's hands is the same as the background color :(
PQ me if you made a new comic with improvements and if you want the URL to Will's tutorial. -Posted on Feb 07, 2007 | | User: Emerald | | 1 | | Uhh.. No? -Posted on Feb 07, 2007 | | Only registered members may vote. Sign up here!
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