No offense, I found myself laughing at all the errors and mistakes. Oh and you don't need to rush through. You look like you rushed. Here's the bad "things".
1. VERY BAD speech boxes. Too much un-needed space.
2. I've noticed the buildings in all the panels are "off" their original places. Like the building in the 11th panel doesn't seem to be in place with the same building in the 12th panel. I've done this before, but I corrected my mistakes. :]
3. Um, well, the comic doesn't make much sense.
