| | User: Falka | | | | You know Rich, whenever I see one of your posts, I always see bad remarks. What's up? -Posted on Aug 01, 2007 | | User: Xacleb the nobody | | | | i'll work on it. and i'll get back to posting comics soon. -Posted on May 23, 2007 | | User: ZeroTheHunter | | 4 | | Text= Good.5. Spriting-4.Story-3.5. Overall...4. -Posted on Apr 02, 2007 | | User: Navi_Takawa | | 5 | | What rich said, but not the first paragraph. -Posted on Sep 10, 2006 | | User: Rich | | | Ok, you see the text? It should be black. ALWAYS black. Or white text on a black bubble. Either way works. Colored text doesnt.
And that jedi dude, he looks REALLY far out of place. You may wish to redo him in the style to go with your comic.
Also the page seems very stiff and forced. Remember, sprite comics are STILL comics. You can zoom in to people and show things differently than a game would. You aren't bound by fixed camera angles. -Posted on Sep 10, 2006 | | Only registered members may vote. Sign up here!
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