Thanks fuku and abt, glad you are giving the characters to me.

abt: I'll send them a pq in the next week about it and the scripting will start as soon as the permission has been granted. I'll post it to you when it's done...and then if you want to edit things to make it fit in continuiniy with what's going on, make those changes.

fuku: How does Desperado talk like? I'm guessing he'll be witty and arrogant and will be talking frequently throughout the fight, though of course if needs be during the fight he will be pretty serious until he makes it ontop.

Oh, and abt: how many pages does this need to be? I'd like to go for 23...but if you want to keep with the 17 pages thing...I can probably squeeze it into that also.

Desperado is a drinking gambler from the American southwest, in a shady part of El Paso, Texas. He's probably got quite a mouth on him to go with the almost stereotypical "accent" of the ol' west cowboys. Since he's a bit of a bitter, sore loser (when losing), then he'd probably be serious if he thinks he's actually losing.

mind_reader
how many pages does this need to be? I'd like to go for 23...but if you want to keep with the 17 pages thing...I can probably squeeze it into that also.

I'll leave that to you. I'd have suggested about 20, but 23 shouldn't be a problem either.

Well, I got permission from everybody and their characters (woo!) and Blue jay trusts my judgement of writing but Azujod and wes_nero want to see the draft and the finished product for the speech checks and everything. Going to start this up now. sorry for talking and spreading this all on the thread it shouldn't be on, it's just we didn't really have another board to go on.

mind_reader
sorry for talking and spreading this all on the thread it shouldn't be on, it's just we didn't really have another board to go on.

No prob, I can clean up this thread once we've got it all worked out.

Here are a few of my characters for the Metahumanist group ( the Meta Supremacist group)Name: Alexander SmithAlias: Heremod Age: 35Powers: Heremod is invulnerable to most weapons ( Energy, Laser weapons will harm him, bullets, blunt objects don't), has abnormal strength,

Info: Heremod is extremely cunning, militant and fanatical about the supremacy of Metahumans over regular humans; He uses violence as a means to intimidate anyone who sees him. He may look big and dumb, but he is a trained and intelligent man who will do whatever it takes to make sure that Metahumans have their own country and that all humans will be seen as vermin and will be crushed.

-------------------------Name: Sarah Wheeler Alias: CerebelleAge:21Powers: Telekinesis, Empath, Has the ability to control people’s bodies by taking over their minds.Info: Cerebelle is psychotic and arrogant, seeing humans as nothing but toys for her to crush and destroy. Her hatred of humans stem from abuse from her father because of her powers as well as being the victim of an attempted assault, which resulted in the three criminal’s brains being crushed into paste by her powers, after that she was recruited by the Metahumanist and she has loved every moment with them, causing nothing but agony and suffering to insects known as humans.

----------------------------------------Name: Norman JormungandAlias: KomodoAge: 23Powers: Since he is a lizard metahuman, his skin is as tough as armor, he has lightening fast reflexes and agility and he can produce a toxic, acidic “Breath” that can melt through almost any material ( The types of material he can’t melt are Volucite and certain types of metal like Titanium)

Info: Komodo acts like a monster than a human, he acts more on impulse and instinct than cognitive thinking or intelligence, he would just as easily kill his allies as he would someone who got in his way, he is not a human, he is an destructive animal who wishes only to destroy,main, and consume.

Here are some basic designs I made on heromachine, I have been having some trouble with a insignia for them, if anyone has an idea on it, let me know.

Heremod



Cerebelle



Komodo

Got another villain you can use:

Real Name: Morgane

Alias: The Zombie Queen

Age: at least 100

Goal: take over the world with zombies

Powers: She is an undead necromancer (ie: zombie witch), she can raise the dead (as zombies), fire eldrich blasts from her hands, fly (so she doesn't have to limp) and teleport by disappearing into the ground.

Persona: Shows disdain for all life, and is just plain malevolent.

Weaknesses: healing powers

Picture link (yeah, only a hero machine concept, feel free to re-interpret as you see fit)

AzuJOD
Got another villain you can use:

Real Name: Morgane

Alias: The Zombie Queen

Age: at least 100

Goal: take over the world with zombies

Powers: She is an undead necromancer (ie: zombie witch), she can raise the dead (as zombies), fire eldrich blasts from her hands, fly (so she doesn't have to limp) and teleport by disappearing into the ground.

Persona: Shows disdain for all life, and is just plain malevolent.

Weaknesses: healing powers

Picture link (yeah, only a hero machine concept, feel free to re-interpret as you see fit)

Finally Zombies Whoooooo :D!!!!

May I kindly request the use of Kraysch and Change in a script.

Villains at last!

Killerton

Coldcut

Aburamushi (a Demon/Oni Lord of Time - although he shouldn't be out-and-out active, he's more of a 'playing in the shadows' type of nefarious mastermind, as anything he'd do would only be to further accomplish his goals that will take place in 'HA:VA')

Mr Capella (same 'puppetmaster' style as Aburamushi, only he's human :P Seems to be growing compulsively-obssessed with amassing a superpowered gang with which to rule the streets of Patriot City. In the HA universe, he may be a good source through which other villains are 'supplied' or 'ordered' to do his bidding, or those of his clients.)



More bad guys will be made available as time goes on!

Dave

Hero
May I kindly request the use of Kraysch and Change in a script.

Go for it, man!

Hero
May I kindly request the use of Kraysch and Change in a script.

It would be cool if you could PQ me some minimal info on how you're planning to use him. I'm not likely to turn down your request though :P

abt - unfortunately due to another opportunity and timing to start and write issues of my own accord now, I can no longer write that script for the Target/Desperado fight I mentioned here. However, you or another writer here wants to write it, they can and I will gladly tell them what I had planned or what have you.

mind_reader - how about you PQ me what you've come up with and we can take it from there?

Uhm... Anarch's appearance seems to have changed a lot from its original version.
Is the new Anarch look for post-HA chapter 2?

There's a new look for Anarch? Where?

The link on Anarch on the very first post of this thread wasn't always that picture, was it...? I'm pretty sure the previous version had color, a different hair scheme (that looks like what I've been drawing for HA 1 and 2)... Oh well. Just checking.

I thought that was the first picture we got, and the colored one was the second. Not 100% certain though.

Oh! You're right. Sorry. It's been a while.

Submitting another villain

Name: Saint
Age:Unknown
Sex: Male

Powers: Agmented speed (very agile), Flames of Heaven ( a strange flame like light from his hands)

Features: He "Plague Doctor" Mask, has a an inverted cross like chain on his side like a rosary

Personality: Calm, collected and cold, almost no emotion.


Note: He considers this world to be unworthy of exsistance and seeks to have the world "Re-born, clean and pure". If Peligroso sees him, Peligroso will try to kill him, and will act without hesitation.

Clothes notes: His coat is white and his shirt is a grey sort of color, and his hair is Orange.



Also gotta put Smiley here since he's in the Villains Alliance thread as well

Name: Smiley

Age: roughly 20's

Alias: Unknown

powers: His claws are razor sharp and can cut at blazing speeds.

Fighting Style: very unpredicatble and psychotic, you never know what to expect with this guy.

Smiley is one of those weird and psychotic characters who has a penchant for goofing off, but don't take him lightly, he is extremely violent.

Here is another one :)

Name: Siren (though she prefers the term Mistress)
Age: ??? (She won't let anyone know her real age, she looks to be in her late 20's)

Powers: Her beauty (which can influence men to do as she commands), Electric Whip

Info: mannerisms is that of a Rich and Arrogant woman, also could be a spoiled brat as well, she usually is seductive and always trying to seduce men and use them for her personal goals, mostly for money.

Weakness: She can be easily flustered and is quick to anger.



Also I know her outfit is a bit more risque than what I wanted, so if anyone wants to redesign her with a more PG 13 rated clothing design, please don't hesitate :)
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Name: Eddie "Hangman" Cappio
Age: 31
Powers: Strength, Invulnerable

Info: Eddie was one of the toughest and most feared Hitman known throughout the 20's and into the 30's, during Prohibition he worked with the Machetini family, his MO was leaving a Hangman's noose on his victim, unfortunately for him, members of the family wanted him out of the way so they could climb the ranks, so they had him murdered, they first beat him with a bat, strangled with his own noose, before setting him on fire and then tossing him into a muddy river. He rose up from the dead in the modern era, he know seeks to create his own criminal empire and become the greatest gangster the world has ever seen.

This is a post to let you know that I've made a few changes to JOD's design.

First, I'll repost the original:

AzuJOD
Picture (with notes):

And now the changes:

His new guns


His Jetpack


So yeah..

Hey Azu, I drew up JOD for fun :D

AzuJOD
This is a post to let you know that I've made a few changes to JOD's design.

First, I'll repost the original:

AzuJOD
Picture (with notes):

And now the changes:

His new guns


His Jetpack


So yeah..

AzuJOD
Got another villain you can use:

Real Name: Morgane

Alias: The Zombie Queen

Age: at least 100

Goal: take over the world with zombies

Powers: She is an undead necromancer (ie: zombie witch), she can raise the dead (as zombies), fire eldrich blasts from her hands, fly (so she doesn't have to limp) and teleport by disappearing into the ground.

Persona: Shows disdain for all life, and is just plain malevolent.

Weaknesses: healing powers

Picture link (yeah, only a hero machine concept, feel free to re-interpret as you see fit)

Azu, What kinda zombies are they going to be? I'm not sure if people want the Traditional Zombies that eat flesh (I myself have no qualms about writing them, just not sure we want to draw that kind of super violent thing), so I wrote them as more of a Nod to White Zombie (Zombies that could Kill, but never ate flesh), I just wanted a bit more info on her Necromancy

sux
Azu, What kinda zombies are they going to be? I'm not sure if people want the Traditional Zombies that eat flesh (I myself have no qualms about writing them, just not sure we want to draw that kind of super violent thing), so I wrote them as more of a Nod to White Zombie (Zombies that could Kill, but never ate flesh), I just wanted a bit more info on her Necromancy

Yeah, I'd go with the "Just killing, non-flesh eating" zombies. They also don't last very long if she isn't nearby, or pumped full of magic beforehand.

AzuJOD

sux
Azu, What kinda zombies are they going to be? I'm not sure if people want the Traditional Zombies that eat flesh (I myself have no qualms about writing them, just not sure we want to draw that kind of super violent thing), so I wrote them as more of a Nod to White Zombie (Zombies that could Kill, but never ate flesh), I just wanted a bit more info on her Necromancy

Yeah, I'd go with the "Just killing, non-flesh eating" zombies. They also don't last very long if she isn't nearby, or pumped full of magic beforehand.

Ok, thanks :). I'll send you what I have so far if you want to comment on it.

sux

AzuJOD

sux
Azu, What kinda zombies are they going to be? I'm not sure if people want the Traditional Zombies that eat flesh (I myself have no qualms about writing them, just not sure we want to draw that kind of super violent thing), so I wrote them as more of a Nod to White Zombie (Zombies that could Kill, but never ate flesh), I just wanted a bit more info on her Necromancy

Yeah, I'd go with the "Just killing, non-flesh eating" zombies. They also don't last very long if she isn't nearby, or pumped full of magic beforehand.

Ok, thanks :). I'll send you what I have so far if you want to comment on it.

Sounds good!

AzuJOD
Got another villain you can use:

Real Name: Morgane

Alias: The Zombie Queen

Age: at least 100

Goal: take over the world with zombies

Powers: She is an undead necromancer (ie: zombie witch), she can raise the dead (as zombies), fire eldrich blasts from her hands, fly (so she doesn't have to limp) and teleport by disappearing into the ground.

Persona: Shows disdain for all life, and is just plain malevolent.

Weaknesses: healing powers

Picture link (yeah, only a hero machine concept, feel free to re-interpret as you see fit)

I did a interpretation :)

Villains are interesting to create. Though I don't have much for him yet, here is another (and a proper villain from me this time):

The Floccinaucinihilipilification (sometimes shortened to The F-Man)
This is a character I've been kicking around in my head for a while. He is a psychic, but uses a specialized form that will lower another's self-esteem. If he tells a cop, for instance, "You can't aim worth crap," the cop will believe this to be so and therefore be unable to aim his weapon at The F-Man. The limiations to this ability: The F-Man must vocalize what he wants to put across, and he needs to know the subject is there (no situation of "Any snipers hidden in the area can't aim").
I've been toying with writing a script which introduces Sparkle and Astral to Heroes Alliance which involves him as a villain--but I'm still figuring who would be able to beat him (certainly not my characters).

I just needed to create a character that used that name. It was calling to me, I guess.

I'm never going to be able to say his name without stuttering.