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~~~Essence of Time~~~
Deamond at 4:00PM, Jan. 9, 2010
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Asgard, Midgard and Utgard - Gods reside in Heaven, Demons in the Underworld. Living in an eternal struggle for dominance amongst each other, Midgard used to be the battlefield of the Gods from Asgard and the Demons from Utgard.
This war was called 'The Eternal War'. To end the meaningless fighting and to enable life on the wasted land of Midgard, 4 Gods and 4 Demons sacrificed their lives to turn into pure Mana, giving life to the forsaken world.
Life started blooming on the once wasted land. Humans, elves, orcs, dwarves and various other beings started to settle on the newborn world, making further fighting between the Asgardians and Utgardians impossible. The fighting ended but now, thousands of years later, the wielders of this Mana- the 8 Great Spirits of Midgard- disappeared, opening a new path for chaos, destruction and warfare.



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Characters:


Ary van Tirith
A young human summoner that obsesses the ability to form pacts with the Great Spirits of Midgard. She lives with a desert-elf called Callo in a little house in Wehrheim before meeting Ledah. The amulet around her neck seems to obsess magic abilities...


Ledah Ainu
A so called Enwa, half god half demon. Living in a strictly divided world, he tried to hide his demonic half. His Master Ariia gives him a quest to free the 8 Great Spirits of Midgard. In return these spirits might be able to turn him into a full god.


Callo Moerbin
Once a desert-elf, Ary's guardian prefers to refer to himself as a dark elf since he left his home to travel with her father. After Ary's parents death, he takes care for the girl. He owns pacts with three small spirits.


Ifrit Ainu
The little clumsy god is Ledah's older half-brother. His father is a famous member of the Holy Senate of Asgard, but due to his naive personality people just can't take him serious. He's got a hydrophobia - even the smallest puddle is worse to him than a fire-breathing chimera.


Yuna Ora
Ary's best friend. She is a money-addict, doing almost anything to gain some ectra Gar (the currency of Midgard). As Half-Demoness, she feels right away, that Ledah and Ifrit are coming from Asgard, which gives her the chance to blackmail them for some extra-money...



____________Update 1/10

I will update spirits and other characters later ^^ *past 1 am here* Hope you like it so far ;)

So far there are 58 pages total (some double-pages) and the cover. Might add some additional art as well x3

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BlkKnight at 6:26PM, Jan. 9, 2010
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Looks interesting. I've got two technical critiques.

1) Shrink that header image. You should be able to see the comic page without scrolling.

2) I'm not sure if it's written this way in the story, but in Ifrit's description you use the term "water-phobia." Shouldn't it be "hydrophobia?"
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last edited on July 14, 2011 11:26AM
Deamond at 3:35AM, Jan. 10, 2010
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BlkKnight
Looks interesting. I've got two technical critiques.

1) Shrink that header image. You should be able to see the comic page without scrolling.

2) I'm not sure if it's written this way in the story, but in Ifrit's description you use the term "water-phobia." Shouldn't it be "hydrophobia?"


Ah, alright, thanks for the advice ^^ English isn't my native language, so guess I mixed that =) Thanks you! ^^ If you see anything else that doesn't fit, please feel free to tell me!

~Deamond

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last edited on July 14, 2011 12:09PM

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