Hey guys Tcb here as you may know when i first got here i blabbered about my manga being a featured comic one day. but then i disappeared for a while and then maybe you guys go "well there goes another disappointment" well not really. i've been drawing alot and i got to my volume 4 cover art.

Yeaps looks cool? and here i have a special for you guys a video of me drawing.I looked in the rules and unless i am blind i scanned for where it says PLEASE NO VIDEOS. but i didn't see it. and it is advertising my soon to be featured comic. :] Comment and rate the vid if you will and leave me something here if you must. Just please. Don't say it reminds you of naruto. cause a Samurai and his B**** in the background ,don't see how that relates to naruto but thnx. here from you guys soon.
http://jp.youtube.com/watch?v=80BQt4tFKB0

Hello there Tcb

Wow you seem to be planning ahead well eh? volume 4 cover before you've even got up page 1! Being ambitious is nice, but let us see some juicy pages! ^__^

I hate to tell you but the Kanji you wrote on the page is not "Boku", it's the kanji "watashi". Doh!
Feel free to check any Japanese you want to write by me, i'm no master but i lived there long enough to help you through some basic stuff and even some not so basic! :)

There is definitely a few Naruto-esque things here, the layout, BG colour scheme, eyes on the background character, the red-black akatsuki colour scheme etc. But i don't think that's a problem at all, it's fine to have inspiration, it's not "similar" to Naruto but rather "ah this is a fan".
Got a bigger picture to post? it'd be easier to judge ^__^

I found it amusing that you chose to link the page with the Japanese "JP" in the link. This and a few other things make me just want to poke you a little that being "Wapanese" will be looked down upon and so be careful with that, try not to do it where it's not necessary.

Anyways i hope i wasn't harsh here, I'm still new to DD, i'm not sure what the standard accepted crit/advice post looks like~

Best of luck on your comic, i'll be reading when it's up so hurry! ;D

-Kriffix

Tcb
Hey guys Tcb here as you may know when i first got here i blabbered about my manga being a featured comic one day. but then i disappeared for a while and then maybe you guys go "well there goes another disappointment" well not really. i've been drawing alot and i got to my volume 4 cover art.

Yeaps looks cool? and here i have a special for you guys a video of me drawing.I looked in the rules and unless i am blind i scanned for where it says PLEASE NO VIDEOS. but i didn't see it. and it is advertising my soon to be featured comic. :] Comment and rate the vid if you will and leave me something here if you must. Just please. Don't say it reminds you of naruto. cause a Samurai and his B**** in the background ,don't see how that relates to naruto but thnx. here from you guys soon.
http://jp.youtube.com/watch?v=80BQt4tFKB0

C'mon man, don't degrade women like that.


Anyways, I have to echo a little of what Kriffix said. It's just a tad weeaboo that it's hosted on the "jp" link. You might want to watch that because people do look down upon that kind of thing.

Other than that, it looks pretty cool. I need to see a higher res to judge, but I am anticipating some pages. Looking forward to them!

thnxs guys hehe. And the kanji i already recognized when in like a japanese game they bokuwa etc and i always recognize that kanji so i decided to look it up and saw it but it isn't too late to make corrections to my work. and hmm the black and red outfit is a sign of me lacking colors in my arsenal to come up witha cooler outfit. I wanted it to be sorta cool like. but i looked at my colors and saw i had no purple. so i said hmm i should work with what i have but like i thought of his outfit being white and red and the scarf black. make it look distracting. But thnx guys. Yeah i am working on the manga before i release any of it. Because you know i don't want there to be such excuses like "can't finish on time" when my update schedule comes etc. The true inspiration for my story is Rurouni Kenshin though :], My drawing style though yes is naruto. Thnx again guys