Hi Ya Ducks,

Please come by and enjoy or flame my Courage Chronicles

Be Waiting for Ya All !!

just wanna tell you that my comic is already on page 10 and still going

It's a good looking piece of work! From your avatar I thought you might be a spriter...
-(not that there's anything wrong with that, it's just not what I'm into)

Anyway, that's a great looking black and white fantasy comic!

Page 11 and 12, in colors, are available to be read and critized :)

You are a very good technical artist, and your colors are pretty good (but maybe a little too bright and vibrant? And I personally think that it had more atmosphere when it was in black and white). You obviously have the world and the relationships of the characters planned out, which is reassuring for the reader and makes them want to keep reading to figure out what's going on. I think your typography is a little too elaborate (I found the female character's diologue to be a bit hard to read, and all of it was a bit too big) which distracted me from the story. Very good overall, and you're developing with each page!

Very good draftsmanship, reminiscent in style of the artwork for the RPG 'Exalted'. The colour pages are, in terms of technical skill, very well done, but they're painfully bright. It's possible to use more natural, muted colours and still get a nice, bright look if you just nudge some of the colours a bit towards grey, brown, black or white. I thought the black and white pages looked nicer personally, the textures looked good and the greytones worked well with the mood.
Since it's a story comic, it's hard to really make judgements after a few pages, but it does look pretty cool so far.

It looks real great! It's hard to give advice or something.. from what I see right now the only thing I can say about it is that the expressions of the male characters seem to be the same all the time, you could use a little more variation in that. The look of the female character hasn't been visible that much for now, but the way she looks... is kind of sexy :D So that's just great.
Another tiny lil' thing is the fact that every character seems to have their own font. Yes, this DOES make clear who's talking, but it doesn't really make it look professional. Try to choose one and maybe think a little longer were you would place them, that would be clear enough.

As for the colouring, I also appreciate the black/white (& grey), but still you did it very nicely. Maybe you could use a little bit lighter/brighter colors tough.

Hope it's all a little bit helpfull :)

Courage Chronicles now has 13 pages !! Hooray!! Hail the lucky number !!

As usual, come inside and make comments, be trolls if you wish too ;)

it's now on page 14, with more colors added !!

And there's a poster for sale made from recolored page 2 here

CouraChroni is now on Page 16!! Hooray!!
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