Hey guys, ive finally decided to restart the comic i was doing before dd crashed some time ago. Ive been studying comic drawing stuff and hopefully i have improved by now. :roll:
The story revolves around philippine mythology creatures beliefs and stories and 7 teenagers who get entangled in all of it. So if you're into myth stuff, maybe you'll like this one too.
I have initially uploaded 5 pages and would be updating once or twice a week if i can, please do check it out. Comments and suggestions are always welcome.
http://www.drunkduck.com/Agimat_Story/index.php?p=90624
going away - Hey Everyone Look What I Did!
[plug][crit] Agimat Story just got restarted!
Adariel
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Frail
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Alrights, alrights.
I really love your use of perspective. That's my greatest love about your comic. Especially in the first page of the chapter and the third page. Absolutely insane.
I also like your art style and coloring. The coloring might not be as complex as other coloring styles, but it fits the comic and the art style very well so all is good.
It's a bit difficult to understand without reading the authors notes, which I find a little disappointing. (I'm a big mythology comic fan) I would recommend trying to work a bit more of this info actually into the comic.
Even so, I think you are doing a marvelous job and I can't wait to see what happens next. ^^
I really love your use of perspective. That's my greatest love about your comic. Especially in the first page of the chapter and the third page. Absolutely insane.
I also like your art style and coloring. The coloring might not be as complex as other coloring styles, but it fits the comic and the art style very well so all is good.
It's a bit difficult to understand without reading the authors notes, which I find a little disappointing. (I'm a big mythology comic fan) I would recommend trying to work a bit more of this info actually into the comic.
Even so, I think you are doing a marvelous job and I can't wait to see what happens next. ^^
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Mark
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artwise your comic is awsome, I still don't understand the plot, but I'm quite sure it'll start to make sense in a few strips.
Also, I suggest darker shadows. This is a bit of a preferance thing, but your colours look a bit flat to me.
Also, I suggest darker shadows. This is a bit of a preferance thing, but your colours look a bit flat to me.
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Adariel
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Lunar Spirit
Why are you like, not promoting our site? : P
I like your comic very much, although some things in it do look kinda wierd or misporportioned. I look foward to seeing more.
I was gonna promote it once i got the my account setup and all :-D
Lucian:
Thanks for that, ill be taking note of those stuff
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Kxela
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Ay! Youre on hyper as well!
-.-" maan its been long and im kinda confused as to whether I used to read this or not... When I saw your new pages on hyper I didnt recognize it but...
Anigmat Story
Anigmat Story
Anigmat Story
I did used to read your comic right? You did the pages on this cool textured paper. augh I need a refresher @_@
-.-" maan its been long and im kinda confused as to whether I used to read this or not... When I saw your new pages on hyper I didnt recognize it but...
Anigmat Story
Anigmat Story
Anigmat Story
I did used to read your comic right? You did the pages on this cool textured paper. augh I need a refresher @_@
last edited on July 14, 2011 1:24PM
Adariel
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Kxela
Ay! Youre on hyper as well!
-.-" maan its been long and im kinda confused as to whether I used to read this or not... When I saw your new pages on hyper I didnt recognize it but...
Anigmat Story
Anigmat Story
Anigmat Story
I did used to read your comic right? You did the pages on this cool textured paper. augh I need a refresher @_@
i re uploaded the pages from before, hope that jags up some memories :)
last edited on July 14, 2011 10:45AM
Adariel
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Im bumping this up from the pits of the stack, just to tell you guys that every update now comes with a bonus extra page, it can be character/creature profiles, background materials, fan art, anything. check out the link for more details.
*hops around*
*hops around*
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Adariel
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Im just bumping this one up again. Storywise chapter 1 aint finished yet but i have 25 or so already uploaded. Thanks for checking it out.
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PaparazziPulse
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Pretty nice job. The quality of the artwork seems to vary throughout, but for the most part it's good. Attractive arrangement of speech bubbles and page layouts, as well.
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