Yeah, it does sound kind of n00bish. But it's not. It's a sprite comic based off of the hit game we all know and love, Super Mario World. Except this time, it's more random, more funny, and more dumberer. You will be laughing your ass off. Once I upload the next couple of pages. You can go ahead and read the next three pages at SMWC's Smack Jeeves site . It is a good comic, so give it a warm welcome. thanks, guys.

Nice speech bubbles.

Hmm...well, I'm impressed by the quality of the sprite comic. You obviously know what you're doing.

well my suggestion would be see if you can make some expressions.

also it might be a good idea to change your spelling a bit to give your characters an "italian accent"

It looks nice, 10/10 for presentation; but the writing... it's like every other "doesn't suck" sprite comic out there. I've seen this before. How about something fresher than "lets mocks video games for strange".

I dislike it when non-italians try to speak like italians when they don't even know how italians talk. In fact, if I'm not mistaken, if the comic was made in italian language only the ones that know how to speak italian would understand it. Maybe you could say that this comic is being traduced or something.

Well, again, my laptop's limitations keep me from reading that comic, but since people actually haven't been having problems with their eyes, i guess that reading it when I get home won't hurt much. But yes, follow their advice of expressions.