Hi Im new here, just posted my 1st chap of G-mancer, do give any comments and hope you guys enjoy the story.
http://www.drunkduck.com/Gmancer/
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[PLUG]/[CRIT] G-mancer, the last geomancer - shonen manga
hayashi
at 10:52AM, Oct. 6, 2007
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Darth Mongoose
at 2:28PM, Oct. 7, 2007
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*spasms*
What the-?
HOLY CRAP! Why is nobody else reading this!? This is brilliant! Please be aware that I'm normally a rather critical person and I don't normally just burst out and say something is brilliant, but this really is. The artwork looks very professional. Grammar could use just a little more attention in places to make it a bit more pro, but otherwise the writing is simple but effective. The only other thing that concerns me is the whole reading right-to-left deal. I'm not a fan of English language comics reading right-to-left (unless they have been translated from a language that reads that way) it disrupts the flow of pages, and in this case, there needs to be something to tell me the reading order, because it took me several pages to work out how to read it! I recommend a title page that says 'reads right to left!' on it.
That's all the criticism I feel I should give this though, because in all other respects, it's very good. It's a straightforward shounen manga with good art. Definitely recommended.
What the-?
HOLY CRAP! Why is nobody else reading this!? This is brilliant! Please be aware that I'm normally a rather critical person and I don't normally just burst out and say something is brilliant, but this really is. The artwork looks very professional. Grammar could use just a little more attention in places to make it a bit more pro, but otherwise the writing is simple but effective. The only other thing that concerns me is the whole reading right-to-left deal. I'm not a fan of English language comics reading right-to-left (unless they have been translated from a language that reads that way) it disrupts the flow of pages, and in this case, there needs to be something to tell me the reading order, because it took me several pages to work out how to read it! I recommend a title page that says 'reads right to left!' on it.
That's all the criticism I feel I should give this though, because in all other respects, it's very good. It's a straightforward shounen manga with good art. Definitely recommended.
last edited on July 14, 2011 12:08PM
Priest_Revan
at 3:28PM, Oct. 7, 2007
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I thought I posted here already...
maybe I just posted on the comic...
well, either way, this comic is really worth a look. It's very nice.
maybe I just posted on the comic...
well, either way, this comic is really worth a look. It's very nice.
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7/0
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7/0
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last edited on July 14, 2011 2:48PM
hayashi
at 11:53PM, Oct. 7, 2007
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Thanks for the comments, I have indicated a note on the front page. And Im really very sorry for my poor english, am also trying to improve in this area besides my drawing and story telling skills. And I welcome anyone who do not mind making friends with me :)
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Ikos
at 2:19PM, Dec. 2, 2007
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I just found it and it rocks! Beautiful artwork and great story!
Not good at outbursts so I am only going to say that it really is something you should read.
Great job!
Not good at outbursts so I am only going to say that it really is something you should read.
Great job!
last edited on July 14, 2011 12:57PM
Pandafilando
at 4:48PM, Sept. 3, 2008
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So far you´ve displayed great drawing skills;that also being perspective, character design and background (the coloring was also great !!!)
but i'll have to admit i didn't quite liked the story so far, but the fact that it's a shonen manga makes me belive you will make many improvements along the way.
so congratulations and keep on the good work.
but i'll have to admit i didn't quite liked the story so far, but the fact that it's a shonen manga makes me belive you will make many improvements along the way.
so congratulations and keep on the good work.
last edited on July 14, 2011 2:38PM
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