http://drunkduck.com/Murky_Waters

Actually, I've only got three strips up. Too soon? Well, check it out anyway, let me know what you think, or what I might wanna change in future strips.(Updates again on Monday or Tuesday.)

Heyah!

I read your stuff and found it so good, that I faved :D
This is just a short answer, but here goes...

The art:
Clear, original and enjoyable. I love the strong lines you use and the facial expressions. It's also nice to see proper backgrounds in a comic such as this.
The hands look great.

Text:
I find this handwriting or yers friggin' superior! Adds something to the whole thign.
Also, the lines are good. Realistic but still funny and interesting enough.
Story got me interested, nice cliffhanger ye've got there.

Criticism:
Hmm... nothing bad to say about the comic itself. But maybe you could change the banner? The pixel-ish font looks kinda cheap. Replace it with a softer font or a handwriting, perhaps?


I'll look forward seeing more of this :)



.pau