It's a bit silly to ask for a crit since this comic just started and I'm only up to eight pages for the draft so I'm plugging away!
It's an experimental comic about the life of an assassin who lives on another planet. He grows up rich family full of drunks and sadists. He is shoved into military school where he fails to learn the value of team-work. Then he gets hired onto the worlds largest debt collection and assassination industry. That's when things start to go downhill.
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