This is a unique comic to DD since it is the only comic featuring a transsexual (not a transvestite) who is going through some weird stuff. The art work has been upped 3 times and the coloring is rerally nice soo please check it out.

I am glad to see more TS themed comics out there. While the comic's theme may appeal to me, the artwork is a tad bit rough in places. But you've already shown great improvement though, so I'm sure that the only thing you need is practice. In time, your art will get even better.

it's really rough. I'd worry more about neatness than color/pretty.
For one thing the pencil...is harder to read than an inked comic. Unless you use a variety of leads (from 2h-6Bish) for a better contrast

Thanks soo much for the tips.. I'm really new to this but I will work on the writting. Ill try typing it and that should yeild better results. Thanks much ^.^

Looking at your archive, I can see a real improvement in your style. You're becoming a better storyteller with every page, so keep at it!