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[PLUG] A Guy's ARM just got RIPPED OFF in my comic!
bryan
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last edited on July 14, 2011 11:35AM
Priest_Revan
at 8:26AM, Oct. 15, 2007
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I thought you meant "ripped off" as in "stolen".
But good comic either way.
But good comic either way.
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last edited on July 14, 2011 2:48PM
bryan
at 4:46PM, Oct. 15, 2007
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Thanks Priest... I loved your comment on the page, hehe. But, nope, an arm gets yanked right off! :P
last edited on July 14, 2011 11:35AM
Priest_Revan
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bryan
Thanks Priest... I loved your comment on the page, hehe. But, nope, an arm gets yanked right off! :P
Well, that's definitely good.
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last edited on July 14, 2011 2:48PM
EmeraldCity
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I really enjoyed the setup for this fight, one small thing I would say as a writer is try to avoid using lines like "Now I don't have to hold back." in the middle of combat. If you feel that whoever kicking the crap out of someone doesn' explain it enough maybe give the reader an explaination later on. Just one little comment. But all in all I had lots of fun with it.
last edited on July 14, 2011 12:21PM
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