going away - Hey Everyone Look What I Did!

[plug? also a bit of help]
raocow at 4:39AM, Feb. 14, 2008
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Howdy everyone.

So yeah... I'm starting out this little project of mine and figured I'd host it here on Drunk Duck, and as of now it's pretty nifty. Thing is, I'm not too sure how my comic fits within the parameters in the categories and sub-categories and art-style and whatnot, and I figured I'd ask the actual users on input about this.

Comic is right here - Another Artificial Time

It's too early on to seriously ask for critism other then first impressions, and I'm aware I'm going for a particular aesthetics, but eh, I'd appreciate the help. The only thing that I find clear 'drunk duck attribute' wise is that it's story-based in a fantasy setting, heh.
last edited on July 14, 2011 3:01PM
BlkKnight at 1:45PM, Feb. 14, 2008
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I like the art style, but at the same time, the story is difficult to follow. It looks like it may be gaining some composure, but it's still a bunch of random stuff loosely held together IMO. You may want to revisit and possibly revise the dialog for clarity in the older pages.
That's "Dr. BlkKnight" to all of you.
last edited on July 14, 2011 11:25AM

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