So I'm half way through penciling v1 and have decided to see what I can do better before I have to ink and post. I'm taking notes, so any words of wisdom would be apreciated. Thank you in advance. (click the banner in the sig)

CURRENT STORY: Takashi Habara is a 12 year old ninja in training. All his life he has been rejected by his fellow villagers. He's decided to walk the path of the ninja and prove that he's worth something. But what lies behind those yellow eyes?

I shall read it as soon as pos.. when i finish... after this... eventually.

Sorry, I'm going on vacation soon and already have like 20 gajabillion comics I'm reading, but I'll add yours to my favorites and get to it eventually.

Hey, I checked out Mosaic and here are some of my observations.

What you've got is pretty good. I can tell you have a plan and like dialogue. I too like dialogue. ^_^ Very cool. Artwise it looks like you might be struggling some with keeping your line quality. I don't know what tools you have, but I'd read some tutorials and try to get on top of that early. Once you do, you'll feel ten billion times better about your art, and even more confident.

I think it's pretty cute, and hope you keep working away at it. And don't be afraid to try new things. This is your comic, no one elses. You sculpt it and play with it how you want. Keep up the hard work. I look forward to seeing more of your comic in the future. =]

I wish I had seen this a billion years ago. Truth be told, I just found it today, thinking that no one had ever bothered to stop bye. ^_^'

In any case, thank you, Shplane, for the fave. I haven't talked to you in forever either.

And thank you ever so much to Hyptosis. Many many many of your observations are/were completely correct. I've since (since back when you posted this that is) started using better pens and playing in photoshop a bit more. I've also read several tutorials and instructional books, and think my work as increased a ridiculous amount. None the less, I plan to keep working, practicing, and above all learning. I will continue to follow on your advice as well. Thank you for the help and compliments, and I hope to see you around MOSAIC some time. ^_^

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