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[PLUG/CRIT} Koji Takahashi Stops the World
Dodger at 4:43PM, Jan. 10, 2011
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Hey there! : )

My name is Emily and I'm here to promote my new comic Koji Takahashi Stops the World! The story follows 17-year-old Koji, who has more on his plate than the average teenager. Not only does he have to take care of his family and struggle through school, but he recently found out he can stop time. Will he be able to control his new powers, or will he be stuck in time forever?

The comic is still pretty new and I'm shamelessly pimping it. I work hard on every page and I hope you enjoy reading it! : D

Thanks for looking.

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Dodger at 5:10PM, Jan. 13, 2011
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Update!

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Keneticlopx at 4:59AM, Jan. 17, 2011
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Good comic so far.
Doesn't seem like there's enough pages for a good CRIT yet though.
Ah well, keep it going, don't end it half way like a lot of good comics on here.
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Dodger at 7:46PM, Jan. 31, 2011
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Keneticlopx
Good comic so far.
Doesn't seem like there's enough pages for a good CRIT yet though.
Ah well, keep it going, don't end it half way like a lot of good comics on here.


Thanks bro! I actually had to cut back on my update schedule because of school... so I won't run out of updates. >>;

I've also updated a few of times since the last post lol!

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Baconmoose at 7:00PM, Feb. 1, 2011
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I honestly can't think of any hardcore criticism yet. The art is good overall, although at times it's a little thick and muddy. I'd recommend using thinner lines for shots that are more zoomed out, personally, and some other line work could stand to be a bit crisper in the earlier pages, but ultimately it has a really neat style and you display a pretty decent grasp of drawing.
Maybe sometimes I think the color usage is a little uninspired, but in other panels I think it's just perfect. I also might suggest more confident shading.

I really like the writing so far. You pace it very appropriately and in a manner that is appealing to the eye and humorous to read and has a very natural and believable flow to it. I really like it.

I'd kind of compare it to Scott Pilgrim, if that makes any sense.
War of the Dawgs 8P
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Dodger at 6:45AM, Feb. 7, 2011
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Drawing a dude with SP asian eyes by himself =/= easy to get the reference. @_@

ANYWAYS, nice review, I agree with you. Constantly trying to improve!

My line art is pretty terrible. lol.

Also updated today! : D



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Genejoke at 7:19AM, Feb. 7, 2011
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When you update it is also worth posting here, as everyone who post has to comment on the previous posters comic you are guaranteed someone will look at it.
Good for pimping your comic.

http://www.drunkduck.com/community/view_topic.php?cid=234&tid=40780&p=174
New comic alert. [..]
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Dodger at 6:46PM, Feb. 8, 2011
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Genejoke
When you update it is also worth posting here, as everyone who post has to comment on the previous posters comic you are guaranteed someone will look at it.
Good for pimping your comic.

http://www.drunkduck.com/community/view_topic.php?cid=234&tid=40780&p=174


Oh yeah, I forgot about that! Thanks for reminding me. : B

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Dodger at 7:14AM, Feb. 14, 2011
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Whoa Update Bump!!

There's some craaaaazy stuff going down! Tell me what you think.

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Dodger at 5:57AM, Feb. 21, 2011
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Update!

It just gets weirder and weirder!

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Castle Pokemetroid at 4:26PM, Feb. 21, 2011
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It sure does. I can't even begin to guess what will happen next.
-Castle Pokemetroid

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Dodger at 9:25PM, Feb. 21, 2011
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Castle Pokemetroid
It sure does. I can't even begin to guess what will happen next.


Keep'n it fresh!

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Dodger at 5:46AM, Feb. 28, 2011
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OH GOD IT JUST GETS WEIRDER AND WEIRDER!! You should totally check it out!

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Dodger at 5:57AM, March 7, 2011
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This page is is just plain sad. ) :

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alwinbot at 6:56PM, March 7, 2011
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It just keeps getting better and better.
Read this comic. It is the greatest journal comic ever written and drawn. Trust me.
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Dodger at 7:21PM, March 7, 2011
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alwinbot
It just keeps getting better and better.


Thanks so much!!!
Means a lot, bro. : B

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Dodger at 6:53AM, March 14, 2011
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THIS NEW UPDATE IS UNREEEEAAAAAALLLLLLL

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Castle Pokemetroid at 12:04PM, March 16, 2011
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Holy crap, how much weirder can it get?
-Castle Pokemetroid

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Swords of Sorrow Movie
Swords of Sorrow Game [scratch.mit.edu]
My CVRPG fan tribute
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Dodger at 6:40AM, March 21, 2011
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Castle Pokemetroid
Holy crap, how much weirder can it get?


Well, it certainly isn't getting any less weirder!! (Update bump!)

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Dodger at 5:10AM, March 28, 2011
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Things are suddenly less weird in today's update. @_@

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Dodger at 5:40AM, April 4, 2011
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Today's update features a new character, she's crazy and she's blonde!

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Dodger at 5:39AM, April 11, 2011
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Update Bump!

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Dodger at 10:08PM, April 24, 2011
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After a week's hiatus we're back with a hot fresh update!

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Dodger at 10:21PM, May 1, 2011
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Hey, I got featured!!

THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! X3

Update Bump!

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Dodger at 5:10AM, May 9, 2011
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Update Bump!

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Only one more page until the end of Issue 1!!!!!! : D Next week's update will end the first chapter, then there'll be a frequently-asked-questions comic, hosted by Tabbi. I have a small list of questions on hand already, but if you have any post them! I'll try and answer most of them. : )

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Dodger at 6:52AM, May 16, 2011
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And thus ends the first issue. : D

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Genejoke at 6:55AM, May 16, 2011
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Which is really handy for review purposes.
New comic alert. [..]
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Dodger at 6:21PM, May 16, 2011
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Ahhhhh I'm scared of the review lololol

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Dodger at 2:21PM, May 23, 2011
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Derpy Update

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Castle Pokemetroid at 3:27AM, May 28, 2011
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Things were starting to barely make sense, then BAM! Chapter over.

I'm expecting some more stuff that will make me question the sanity of the comic again.

In other words, more weird stuff!
-Castle Pokemetroid

Spriter.
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Swords of Sorrow Game [scratch.mit.edu]
My CVRPG fan tribute
Swords of Sorrow Movie 2
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