Having just reached my first milestone of 25 pages, I figured that now was as good of a time as any to post my plug and a request for critique.
To sum up my comic, its the story of an (arguably) evil cult out to save the Earth, a group reluctantly tasked with saving humanity from them, and the annoying realities of advanced genetic engineering.
Along the way, the story delves into questions like: "Does our past have define our future?" and: "Why are good minions so hard to find?"
The story is just beginning, and I've only just started to open up the rabbithole.
If you want to go for a little ride around the edge of reality, now's the time.
As far as critiques go, I have a fairly thick skin, but don't be too hard on me please, I'm learning as I go here. That said, I would rather have a mistake I missed pointed out to me early on when I can fix it rather than a year or two down the line when I've published! ^^' (already had one guy point out a ton of embarrassing spelling mistakes on some of the early pages that I had to then fix, but at least they're corrected now!)
Please feel free to call me on anything that you think is off in the art or the writing, just do it nicely.
One last thing: I shift the art style with the mood, I occilate from hyper-detailed manga/airbrush art to sketchy and impressionistic noir, sometimes within the same page. This is intentional. If you think a particular scene's style doesn't fit the mood, though, feel free to say something, just don't be surprised when I'm drawing indiviual hairs on one panel and look like I'm drawing with a paint roller in the next.
going away - Hey Everyone Look What I Did!
[plug/crit]The Greening wars
Scorpion451 at 7:54AM, Feb. 2, 2011
Visit my deviantArt page to see some of my artwork and what I'm up to when I'm playing the not-working-on-my-webcomic game
last edited on July 14, 2011 3:24PM
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