Paranormal, the story of a young government agent with a gun fetish who fights the forces of evil with the aid of an unwilling college student.
An old comic I'm reviving. My art style is changing and I want to know how to improve it.

From the beginning... http://www.drunkduck.com/Paranormal/?p=52130

Sorry man but your art style looks like screenshots from someone's first attempt at making a flash game, if that. Try to smooth out your lines and try using a computer font, I can barely read your marker writing. It looks like you went to town with MS Paint, try upgrading to Photoshop or something similar, they're all over.

HOWEVER, your plotline is not nearly as wonky as your artwork. I enjoy the college bits, they're the same kind of actually FUNNY humor as the "Decline of Video Gaming" flash series. Some good jokes in there. Work on the art, keep up the storyline, and you'll have made a webcomic worth adding to my favorites.

it's pretty funny...

but the art does need some help...

but actually, I could live with the art if the speech bubbles weren't so wobbly and the words so scrunched together...

type it out man, type it out.

I'm working on the art, but unless someone's willing to do my word bubbles, I can't change that. I suck at computer text.

You suck at computer text? Even MS Paint has a word tool so you don't have to write words by hand...

I agree with what has been previously said. Funny story/all right art.

For the word bubbles I think it would be an improvement just to do circles/ovals with the shape tool and then text over that.

I'd say just keep working at it, and don't be afraid to try new techniques/ tools. You may find something that you like better. Ganbatte! ^_^

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