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[Plug/Crit]My sci-fi fantasy adventure manga comics: FIGHT and FIGHT_2
mlai at 5:46PM, Nov. 12, 2007
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Now at 47 pages.

Now at 37 pages.

FIGHT 1 and 2 are crossover fan comics. Characters from many obscure source works are mysteriously gathered together on a desolate world, their minds as barren and pristine as the landscapes before them. The only instruction left to them is one cryptic word on a single piece of paper that they all find on their persons. That's the entire premise. How far can the authors take this? Have you ever seen a crossover comic like this? Do you recognize anybody? Written and drawn by Mlai and Ed Bangalan.

They are two complementary stories that occur in the same world; F2 is not a sequel (or prequel) to F1.

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FIGHT current chapter: Filling In The Gaps
FIGHT_2 current chapter: Light Years of Gold
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Priest_Revan at 9:47PM, Nov. 12, 2007
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The overall comic looks pretty good. I like the text, the presentation, and the overall layout.

I would say "add colour" but your pages are really big and dramatic and that would be fairly difficult.
Updates Tuesday, Thursday, and Saturday's (depends).

7/0

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PaulLavallee at 10:05PM, Nov. 12, 2007
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Nice art. I can see improvements in your art as the story progresses. My only crit would be it seems some panels have less effort in them. It kinda hinders the pages whole effect. But other than that its looking really good!
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