http://www.drunkduck.com/Yakage_Force/

I'd like some constructive criticism and I'm also looking to build up a reader base of more than like 5 people lol. Been doing the manga for nearly two years and I'm kind of tired of the constant 5/5's and no actual feedback. I want to improve but I'm a poor judge of my own work so... You see my problem.

Thanks in advance for any feedback this brings, whether it be on the comments of the manga itself, or here.

I rather liked the way the first nose was drawn, it was different.

But then I saw they all had that nose and it lost originality.

Of course I happen to be the only one who criticizes nose drawings.

Or pays attention to the noses at all.


But I will say that I rather like the art even with the continuous noses.

Haha, you know, I've never had that criticism before, but it's something to consider, thanks for that, seriously.

TripleB
Haha, you know, I've never had that criticism before, but it's something to consider, thanks for that, seriously.

Eh, I'm bored enough, and you also want some criticism. I'm going to go slowly through your comic archive and complain about any random thing I can over the next week or more.

If you read my comic, I never leave a blank spot on the comments from the author section. I always have something to complain about on any subject, no matter how perfect it may be. Even if I made it myself, I still have things to talk about.

Well, here I go to tear up your comic archive.

XD

TripleB
XD

I just like to complain. It's like a past time. lol

I'm not feeling so well right now, so I might not get to the rest of your archive for a while.

New page up, link's below.