Earth is our world; it is the base from which we make our empires, our relationships, and our very own lives. The problem is, in case you were wondering, is that we forge our own worlds of perception as we grow up and interact with the billions of others, creating within us, vast superstructures of who we are as unique individuals. So we are all simultaneously blessed and doomed to share the same planet; to make the most of these colliding worlds of perception. The imagination is our most powerful tool in dealing with this situation, but there is little out there today to exercise such a vast and powerful thing. Worlds Apart is aimed at opening your mind, making your soul laugh, and exercising your divine imagination.
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Hahaha that's really funny! :D I love the simple, cartoon style. Don't change a thing!

thanks alot we are trying to spread the word about worlds apart comics please tell your friends to come and see and comment

All right. I looked over your comic and it looked pretty decent. It definitely had some funny moments that made me smile so you got the humor covered.

Few things that you could do to improve:

You might want to increase the size of your pages a little bit, to make it easier to read.

It's hard to tell a simple joke in a 12 frame format. Some of your pages clearly look like you're stretching the story to fit the page. This will tone down the impact of your jokes.

You made few pages that features several sketches like this one and this one . These could be broken down into several pages.

I also noticed that you updated 18 pages in one go and stopped afterward. Don't do bulk uploads like that in one day. It only registers as one update and thus is less like to be noticed by new people. You should spread the updates. For example, if you'd post 1 page 3 times a week, then these same 18 pages would last you for more than a month. It's much easier for folks to notice you if you're constantly updating your comic. Comics that don't get updated tend to disappear from memory around here, even if it contains lots of pages.

Then again, these are just the opinions of a single man. Syas there seems to like it, just the way it is so you're free to ignore this comment of mine.