going away - Hey Everyone Look What I Did!

[PLUG/CRIT] Webcomic where children kill eaach other!
Brandonyu2000 at 5:34AM, Dec. 30, 2006
(offline)
posts: 37
joined: 12-28-2006
I haven't got to the killing part, but Im getting to it. I am still at the part where the "competition" begins. Im a noob at webcomics, so please tell me if it is good or bad. Thanks!

http://www.drunkduck.com/Game_of_Death/
last edited on July 14, 2011 11:32AM
Brandonyu2000 at 5:37AM, Dec. 30, 2006
(offline)
posts: 37
joined: 12-28-2006
oooppssss wrong URL

http://www.drunkduck.com/Game_of_Death/
last edited on July 14, 2011 11:32AM
Brandonyu2000 at 2:16AM, Dec. 31, 2006
(offline)
posts: 37
joined: 12-28-2006
sooooo...... can anybody comment or give me tips/ratings?
last edited on July 14, 2011 11:32AM
Darth Mongoose at 11:46AM, Dec. 31, 2006
(online)
posts: 488
joined: 1-7-2006
Hard to say much about the comic with just four pages up. I am somewhat concerned that at the moment it looks like it could just turn into a 'Battle Royale' ripoff. I hope you have some original ideas or something to make it original.
From an artistic perspective, you're not really using the comic format to it's fullest. At the moment the pages are tiny and frequently have only one or two panels, making it like reading a comic that goes a single panel to a single page, making it all seem a bit slow and not very dramatic. A webcomic page can be up to 700 pixels wide and as tall as you like, so you could get a lot more going on per page and make a bigger impact with bigger pages, plus you'd have room for more background and detail, because at the moment, it's all a bit sparse looking.
Basically I think the main thing you need to do is slow down. Don't rush so much, spend more time on your pages to make them more interesting looking and draw the reader in.
last edited on July 14, 2011 12:08PM
Brandonyu2000 at 8:39PM, Dec. 31, 2006
(offline)
posts: 37
joined: 12-28-2006
Its hard for an eleven year old to do all that. But thanx for the tip! Youve been a greathelp! Ill try to put in more effort into each page.
last edited on July 14, 2011 11:32AM

Forgot Password
©2011-2012 WOWIO, Inc. All Rights ReservedAdvertisement