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[plug/crit] two plumbers and a fox
ancara at 4:10PM, May 29, 2007
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This is the adventures of Mario, Luigi, and ancara, a fox that loves to have adventures. wherever they go, chaos, as well as stupidity, is sure to follow.

well anyways, i'm open to any suggestions/ideas/ect., as well as healthy criticism from ya'll, ok?

well, now that i've made this thread thingy, time to get to work on some more comics, m'kay?

Best. Ancara pic. ever.
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Puff_Of_Smoke at 1:20PM, May 30, 2007
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don't mix sprites. especially that ugly recolour it looks nothing like a natural fox, more like some extremely sick animal-humanoid thing... work on getting rid of the blank space... and find better backgrounds aswell...

basicly, Improve on everything... I'll read it more so I can criticize the humour...

Edit: the humour is WAY too cliche...
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I have a gun. It's really powerful. Especially against living things.
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Puff_Of_Smoke at 1:21PM, May 30, 2007
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Edited... double post.
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I have a gun. It's really powerful. Especially against living things.
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