http://www.drunkduck.com/Totally_Cool_Comic/

It's a comic I made. Drasnus used to do the occasional guest comic but he makes a lot of the comics nowadays so I guess he is the co-creator of this comic. It doesn't have a story and each page is independent from each other. The art is crude, the jokes are juvenile and the creators may or may not be insane. I would say enjoy, but that's pushing it. Well I'm going to say it anyway. Enjoy and I am grateful if you take a minute out of your day to post some critique about my humble comic.

This comic contains penises and blood so if you don't like either then I suggest not reading the earlier stuff. The more recent comics have less penises and blood but be warned that they may contain some anyway.

Wow, I feel cheap.

I actually smirked a couple of times.

I am glad you were honest about the comic, so I will be too.

The art is crude and often does what it needs to, sometimes though I was wondering if the stick man in panel x was supposed to be the same stickman from panel y.

Also despite there being some comedy in there, it is often delivered poorly therefore loosing it's punch.

I must admit it didn't take long for me to want to stop reading, the hit rate on the gags is pretty low but I persevered for the sake of giving a fair review. I won't say I was glad I did but it helped me look a bit more favourably on the comic.

http://www.drunkduck.com/Totally_Cool_Comic/index.php?p=500420
I like that one.
http://www.drunkduck.com/Totally_Cool_Comic/index.php?p=501786
and this.

I started with the latest page and worked back, a mistake as there is some good stuff if you persevere. I think the stuff by Drasnus has the better hit rate. I also like the way you dis other comics and the sheer randomness of some of the gags.


Overall,
If you can revel in the sheer immaturity and crudeness there is something to like and for the lake of belly laughs the guys show some balls with their gags.

get stricter on yourselves, tighten it up a bit and work on the pucnlines.