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[Plug/Crit] To Be Loved (Shoujo Manga)
insanelysane at 1:58AM, Oct. 8, 2006
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It's reached the first 50 pages!

After having plugged my comic some time ago, I decided that my art isn't going to improve if I don't allow constructive critiques as well. Well please go easy on me because this is my first attempt at trying to draw a webcomic... I've been using a few inking styles in my comic so far... I know my first few pages is a horror.. >_<

so what I want to know is..

- Am i improving?

- Is there anything I could do to try and improve my art even more?

- Which style I used did you find most comfortable with reading?
(There's the marker style in chapter 1 and the pencil style in chapter 2... and there's this one page in Chapter 1 where I used liquid ink to ink the page instead]

- Should I continue using different inking styles to allow more variation? (watercolour? Liquid inks? Markers? in Corel Painter?)

- How am I doing overall (give an overall idea of how you think my comic is.. like perhaps I have a tendency to draw necks that are too long thoughout the whole comic so far?)


Please go here
Thank you for your time. :)
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xkyuketsuki at 11:11PM, Oct. 9, 2006
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I love the way you use screentones
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insanelysane at 3:55AM, Oct. 10, 2006
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thank you! but should i keep up with my current style? or should i change it?
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xkyuketsuki at 10:19AM, Oct. 10, 2006
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looks good the way it is now imo ^_^
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