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mundy
at 3:23AM, April 14, 2008
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Interested in what people have to say etc. and evaluations
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Priest_Revan
at 2:36PM, April 14, 2008
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Good art and colouring you got there. No real negatives that I see other than just a little messyness of the lines (which I personally like).
Othewise, no big problems.
Your narration is good, text is legible, and speech bubbles look fantastic. Overall, comic is worth a read.
Othewise, no big problems.
Your narration is good, text is legible, and speech bubbles look fantastic. Overall, comic is worth a read.
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7/0
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7/0
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mundy
at 2:35AM, April 16, 2008
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:) Thanks!
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Frae
at 9:20AM, April 16, 2008
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I say the same. The narration is done well and the art looks good. This is kind of sad at the moment and I wonder if you're going to stay with this sad overtone or if you are going to do a 180 and make everything happy. Either way, I think I'm going to follow this series.
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mundy
at 12:55AM, April 17, 2008
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Thanks for the comment:)
I'm going to try and perk things up a bit in a few pages but the story is a bit up and down...mainly down
I'm going to try and perk things up a bit in a few pages but the story is a bit up and down...mainly down
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