Just wanted to post a little advertisement for the comic :3 The Faction is now offering Fan Service as well ^~^ Here's the link:

http://www.drunkduck.com/The_Faction/

BTW, The Faction is rated M (language, adult content, violence, etc.) Take care :3

Updating almost everyday from now on :3 Take a peek when you get the chance ^~^:

http://www.drunkduck.com/The_Faction/

Don't be shy, take a look :3 :3

http://www.drunkduck.com/The_Faction

Okay, let's do this.

The story is pretty good and the art's nice. (Good use of angles.) The shading and coloring were definitely a good thing. The only bad thing I can suggest you fix is the grammar (You're instead of your, that sort of thing.)

thanks for the comment :3 Yea, in my earlier pages, I was very busy and didn't have time to really check for grammar ;; But now that I do, I've improved :3 thanks for pointing that out ^^

Updated a few times btw :3 Feel free to take a look everybody ^^

The story is about to take a dramatic turn...Feel free to check it out ^.~ I update every single day :3 teehee ^^:

http://www.drunkduck.com/The_Faction


Just a warning: Contains some mature content

Woot im reaching the 100 mark finally :3 The Faction has reached 95 pages today ^^ feel free to take a look :3:

http://drunkduck.com/The_Faction

As promised, I bring you one page everyday :3 I updated once again ^^ im getting real excited now that im almost at the 100 page mark ^^ weee :3 feel free to check out the new page ^~^

http://drunkduck.com/The_Faction

Wow, man, I wish I could keep promises like that... XD;;

Your art style is lovely, there's nothing I'd change about that. The look and feel of the comic is very nice... All I would change, however, is the speech bubbles. They don't seem to blend well with the comic - they're more pixelated and harsher in comparison to the comic's soft look. Maybe if you used a different colour, and used anti-alias on them as well?
Also, no offence, but Comic Sans is a very overused font. xD;;; Give something else a try - anything's good, even Arial. Oh, but steer clear of Times New Roman. XD! And (sorry, more to come DX) try not to use so many exclamation and question marks in one go. Even though it can be used to effect, I find just having one or two marks after a sentence is much more effective then five or six.

But beside my ranting, this is looking like a very nice comic so far! You obviously work hard to be able to produce a page every day - 100 pages is just on the horizon! Well done! >w<

Keep up the good work. ^^

thanks :3 I know about my speech bubble problem and right now it's kinda hard to fix it >< But im working on it tho :3 Yea, my goal is to update everyday even with a 7 hour job in the way :s Thanks again for the crit ^^

Yeah, it can be a pain in the ass. D:

Seven hour job plus a comic that updates every day? I seriously wouldn't be able to manage that. xDDD!!

You're welcome. ^^ I hope it helps in some way. xD;;

yea :s it really is difficult updating everyday like this xD But it's fun :3 It's my favourite pasttime when im not working, besides eatting and videogames ofcourse ^^

i will be posting the next real page tomorrow moring :3 for now, i put up a fanart and a filler ^^:

http://drunkduck.com/The_Faction

I think im gonna change my paging layouts for The Faction from now on :3 All thanks to Oneminutecomic's awesome suggestion ^^ I've decided to paint the backgrounds black from now on :3 Thanks Oneminutecomics ^^