Hi everybody!

I started this comic about a month ago and got some great feedback so far, but you can never advertise enough so I thought I'd give my first creation a plug.

(WARNING - this rated 'Mature' - so far its pretty restrained, but later on there will be nudity and some explicit violence.)

http://www.drunkduck.com/The_Cull/




Feel free to give me your full, blunt assessment of my work - any and all criticism that is in the least bit constructive is greatly appreciated.

Some things I'm wondering about:

Are the images too big - do you have to scroll a lot and does it
affect your reading of the comic?

Is there too much detail/not enough contrast?

Can the font be read or should it be bigger?

Any other criticism is welcome and anyone who has free time on their hands and knows how to work with computer images (I sure don't) can contact me if they're interested in trying their hand at coloring some of this stuff.

Thanks and enjoy your weekends and be creative!

Looks to be interesting. Fav'd it. :)

A few comments concerning your questions.

I can take or leave the scrolling. I don't mind scrolling, really, just I prefer one solid direction or another.

My only issue is the font. Is it 'Dragonbones' the entire time? I found it a bit too small and jagged. Particularly with the sharp black background, it distracts from the smoother flow of the otherwise talented artwork.

Props on a primal themed work, btw.