Hi peoples! I think it's my turn to be an attention whore now~ :D
Just kidding, anyways, I recently finished the first chapter of my comic The Brotherhood and I'd appreciate it if I could get some people to look at it and give my some good criticisms. It's my first time every doing something like this so of course I've got a lot of flaws and room for improvement. Suggestions on stuff like fonts and speech bubble placement are welcome. But if you could, please don't crit pages 1 through 4 'cause they're old and ugly, I need to redraw them someday, I know it's dumb to even have them up there.
So, ummm, blah blah blah please be nice and helpful, I try hard! D:
and now I open the floor to your suggestions: