well we have began our story and I wanted to get some face time.

First page of the comic , read here on.

I can tell you what it's not.

try an actual critique

okay, fine.

1. The bio pages. Lose 'em. Part of a good story is finding out things about a character. Not reading them off a page of a comic.

2. Resizing and recolouring is terribly done. Especially that ugly barf green thing.

3. Spelling. Improve it.

4. The whole damn thing's a big cliche.

1. those is to get to know the members not their characters

2. that's my character, and watch it I can take that as an insult

3. I don't spell check get use to it

4. get over yourself

Coveinant
1. those is to get to know the members not their characters

2. that's my character, and watch it I can take that as an insult

3. I don't spell check get use to it

4. get over yourself

1. Who cares about the members, it's a comic not a gathering.

2. Then do so.

3. There's your problem.

4. *sigh* Some people never learn.

it's a club comic, of course you want to know of the members. DUH.

...No wonder why no one likes you.

some one else critique the comic please.

Um... I'd hate to say it, but I agree with PoS...

Paper_Cut
Um... I'd hate to say it, but I agree with PoS...

That's kind of biased, you know.

I don't see a problem with the bios in the comic itself, but in my opinion the bios should be in all in one page or all together in a set of pages and not like cutting in after so-and-so pages or when you are introducing a new character, or maybe create a spereate comic for the characters' bio and each page can be a character's profile since you can't add custom pages like SJ. You can add all of them in the beginning (not really recommended) or actually make a seperat comic just for profiles so the readers can have an otpion of whether or not to read the bios so they can figure out the characters personailties themselves or find out beforehand.
So anyways if you don't like what i say, you can always ignore it :)