Please read my comic Sonic Evolution. tell me what you think and what I need to improve on. And no sprite comic hating comments.:kitty::neenjah:

Ok, first of all it would help if you gave a link instead of us clicking on your profile then your comic, second of all I can't view it because i'm under 18 :(

Well, I hate almost all sprite comics for obvious reasons. But here it goes

It's 26 pages long, and already too much of it is filler.

Dialogue is corny.
B level jokes.
Jumps around too much. You need a nice even flow of story. Even if it means taking the extra 5 minutes to make another page.


That's all I got time for.

I'M AWAY!

...well, I can't crit it.

Wow...just, wow. I honestly tried to evaluate this comic seriously. I was taking notes and everything!

1) Mario/Link filler page, has nothing to do with Sonic, isn't even yours- never do that again....

2) Same problem as most sprite comics- gigantic empty spaces in panels for no apparent reason. If you don't have Photoshop, there are free graphic programs out there that allow you to zoom in, and have layers- Graphics Gale is good...

3) Possibly add some 'tails' to the word balloons, the using-color-to-show-the-speaker thing isn't that great.

4) Try to keep filler to a minimum. Too much filler causes people to stop showing up to look.

Then, as I continued to go through the archives, I realized that the comic- the one with a storyline, about some hedgehog-goddess showing up, and the hilarity that would ensue, had died....The "comic" had devolved into complete nonsense,random filler pages filled with bizarro gay-sex hedgehog scenes.....

Best advice- kill it now, before it spreads.

Umm...Yeah....

can i assist with the comic?