If you do decide to critique this be nice. I'm not crazy about critiques because this is my baby that has been forumlating in my mind for many years. I've just started, so give the comic newbie a break. Kay? Cool.

Sanguem Deus Comic can be located on this site. Here is a quick link to it: Link

If you have a live journal account or a Deviant Art account you can gain access to the contests and art that I do along with the comic. ^_^

Sanguem Deus Live Journal
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Enjoy what I have so far~ It's got a long trip to go before ever being finished.

The comic is okay, I like the last page the best because you draw better in Black and White. Gives the comic a more "darker" feeling. You could improve in anathomy and all that, but overall your style is good.

I also took a look in your deviant-gallery, only on some pictures. I'm not so fond of reading poetry sorry :'P

Most of my Deviant Art is images and not poetry anyways. :P Thank you for your comment.

Oooh, very nice! I love the way you draw the faces, there's a manga influence, but you don't let that overwhelm your style, but allow the smooth lines of manga to compliment the detailed, soft pencil work, which looks lovely. For improvment, I'd advise maybe playing with the layout of your pages a bit. It's all just square and rectangular with big borders at the moment. The thick borders don't work so well with your delicate drawing style, and you should throw in some bigger panels once in a while, show off your artwork! Another little criticism is that at the moment you're drawing everything in 'middle' view. the characters appear about the same size and closeness to the 'camera' in every panel. If you experimented more with some bigger face close-ups and maybe some far shots, you could really notch up the drama.
Can't wait to see more of this. I'm putting it on my faves list.

It'd help if you show more perspective angles in your comic. While you do well zooming in and out showing different details, the angle always stays the same, making the whole thing look a bit predictable

Thank you both for you excellent comments. I'll see what I can do with future panels. Perspectives and different angles give me alot of trouble, but I'll work on it. :D