I have been here for a little while, and I am finally approaching my 100th comic.

Please, feel free to let me know what you think! :)

www.drunkduck.com/RPS

Anyone? Criticism? No?

Just read through the first ten strips. Personally, it's not my thing. The jokes are falling flat a fair bit. The strip with Rita in three panels saying 'what you looking at bitch' at the end is an example. Maybe from panel one to two, we could see Rita get upset at the viewer for looking at her... but as is, the joke ain't working for me.

I suggest working on the material a little more... There seems to be a lot of 'in jokes' that might be funny if you were 'in the know', but I don't know these characters, I don't know what makes them tick. I'd aim to produce a strip that anyone can pick up, regardless if it's number one or number 100 and feel as though they 'get it'. Kinda like Dilbert. They can read sequentially, but you can pick one up in isolation and it stands on it's own.

That said, there are strips that you have posted that have made me smile :)

Apologies if this comes over as a little harsh but good luck with this in the future!

Dan
MrHades