New comic. Here are the first 8 pages:










The thing about this comic is that it is read side-by-side with "LOGS," messages which can be found next to each page at the home site. I suggest reading these before critiquing.

Thank you.

http://www.ourfutureisred.com/

Link's a little off. ^.~
It's interesting! Fun to see some non-autobio work from you, Allan. I like the text and visual mix a lot, but I'm not a big fan of the mouse-over-to-read style of the logs. Could by my old, tired eyes though.
Nice, gritty colorwork and excellent shadows.

amanda
Link's a little off. ^.~
It's interesting! Fun to see some non-autobio work from you, Allan. I like the text and visual mix a lot, but I'm not a big fan of the mouse-over-to-read style of the logs. Could by my old, tired eyes though.
Nice, gritty colorwork and excellent shadows.

Woops! Thanks for telling me about the link!

Also, yeah, it's fun to make some non-autobio work. More than fun. Thrilling.

If you don't dig the mouse-over-to-read logs, at the end of every part of a chapter (roughly 7-8 pages) all the logs will be put onto a webpage where you can read them as a whole, totally lit-up and easily legible. Still working on that page, but it is coming soon!

Also, here is a new page for the strip, along with brand new LOGs on the main page:

Good art and it looks like it will have a much more serious plot than Allan. I just find it too bad that you haven't updated on it yet. :(