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[PLUG/CRIT] Raising Hell.
Agham at 11:26AM, Sept. 30, 2008
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Heyas all.

My name's Agham (Aggie), I just moved my web comic from SmackJeeves to here. I thought it'd be a better place to host it, so far I think I like it. :D

Anyway, feel free to visit, drop a line, let me know what you think.
All critiques are welcome as long as they're not plain blunt "you suck!" comments, just bear in mind I'm an amateur with no previous experience and/or education in that field, I also do my own writing, drawing, coloring and shading.

Link:
Raising Hell .

Synopsys:
Meet Adam and Noor, my boys.

If you think this is a mushy cute little kiddies comic, you couldn't be more wrong.
This ain't some family oriented comic about a proud daddy and golden children that pull cute and humorous stunts.
This is the real deal. This is about mischief, pure and concentrated as nature created it. And the funny part is, it goes both ways.

On one hand we have Adam (8yo) and Noor (6yo), and on the other we have Dad. I'm gonna put these two boys through anything and everything that comes to mind, that and of course they're bound to retaliate with one thing or another, and I'm bound to capture it on my drawing board.


Description:
One strip gag, updated twice a week.
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PIT_FACE at 5:02PM, Sept. 30, 2008
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heh, pretty cute.
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Agham at 6:55AM, Oct. 1, 2008
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Updated today :)
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PIT_FACE at 8:05AM, Oct. 1, 2008
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sorry about the short "critique" last night man. i was wracked with MAJOR headache outa nowhere and started feeling kinda sick so i really didnt wanna hang on the net anymore, but i did start reading your comic and i didnt wanna run off without saying anything,so that was all i had time to burp out before my body self-destructed and went Chernobyl on me....there were no survivors. and yes i am a She. avatar give it away? most people dont really notice i dont think. thanks anyways.

and i STILL stick by my cute comment, cuase they are! they're both little assholes too, but ya gotta love em at the same time! they seem more mature too though then normal real life 6-8 year olds, but i dont think that hurts anything. they actually really remind me of little south park type kids. heh heh. and i love south park, so that's a definite compliment. and the art fits the gags, VERY bright and easy to read. overall i think you have something pretty good! keep at it man.
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Agham at 7:43PM, Oct. 1, 2008
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Much better! <3

Anyway, yeah, they do seem a tad more mature than 6-8yo's but I think it kind of fits the idea, any less matuer and it turns into a kiddy cartoonish comic which is not my intention.

Edit: You're a SHE?.. I honestly did not know, your avatar is kind of blurry :\
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PIT_FACE at 12:06PM, Oct. 2, 2008
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ah yes, i completely agree aobut that. the maturity isnt out of place.
and when ya said "his" back in the after lilly topic, i figured ya's caughto n to something saying i was a chick. so that's all i was refering, but anyways! i thought ya'd like the critique better.haha!
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Agham at 3:39PM, Oct. 2, 2008
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...when ya said "his" ...

Yeah, I always do that "in case". But lookit, it came in handy ^^.

Now to take advantage of that somehow.. hmmm....
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Agham at 1:45AM, Oct. 5, 2008
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Updated . :)
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Agham at 12:11AM, Oct. 9, 2008
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Update.

Make sure to check out the leet filler for Heroes Untite: EGO. :)
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Agham at 6:04AM, Oct. 15, 2008
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Late update :/
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Agham at 5:28AM, Oct. 19, 2008
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What can I say. You don't have to play rough to get to them.

If your kid's anything like you, you'll know exactly what to do to punish them.
..more..
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Agham at 5:23PM, Nov. 6, 2008
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Belated Halloween update .
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Agham at 9:33PM, Nov. 9, 2008
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And we're up [v] again. :)

I gotta confess. This is an idea that crossed my mind as a kid, and I nearly tricked a cousin into it.
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hXcAlucardhXc at 9:52PM, Nov. 9, 2008
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This is nice. I really like the effort you put into shading the comics, it shows you care.
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Agham at 11:24PM, Nov. 9, 2008
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Hehe, thanks.

Ps: You know you can say that on the comic page, maybe lock in a rating too? ;)
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Agham at 12:37PM, Nov. 23, 2008
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Update !!

XD
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Agham at 3:58PM, Nov. 28, 2008
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Updated :D
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