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[plug/crit] Pokemon Yellow Comics, a drawn pokemon webcomic
MysteriousJeff at 9:50AM, Aug. 19, 2007
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http://www.drunkduck.com/Pokemon_Yellow_Comics

This is my Pokemon webcomic. It is drawn, but not in a strict manga style like pretty much every other drawn Pokemon comic, but more of a half-manga, half-cartoony style. it's hard to explain. it's based on the hit video game Pokemon Special Pikachu Edition, otherwise commonly known as Pokemon Yellow.

I would like some critique please, because 1: Out of all the comments i've ever had on PYC, only about 1 or 2 had critique in it 2: I know that my comic isn't perfect, but I'd like to help it get a tiny bit closer.
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VinceLikesRooster at 11:39PM, Sept. 30, 2007
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i like ur comic by the way. anyway, are there any programs that can help me improve my comic design. i dont want to pay or have to do a trial, just a free download
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Walrus at 4:06AM, Oct. 25, 2007
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hey it's better than mine.
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Priest_Revan at 9:52AM, Oct. 25, 2007
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Looks good. Colour works, jokes are funny, and it's actually a drawn pokemon comic.

It's good overall.
Updates Tuesday, Thursday, and Saturday's (depends).

7/0

Offering Project Wonderful Ad space on my website.
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trevoramueller at 11:15AM, Oct. 25, 2007
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Not bad. Some backgrounds would be nice.
My Drunk Duck Comics:


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Poke Alster at 3:26PM, Oct. 28, 2007
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Yeh i think its good too not much i can crit bout that
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VinceLikesRooster at 9:47PM, Oct. 30, 2007
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so far, so good! I dont see anything wrong. its better than what I can do
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