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[PLUG/CRIT] Ninja Shizatch
Rhykker at 8:03AM, July 5, 2007
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Animated Flash webcomic with mouse-over interaction.

Action comedy.

Like a Jackie Chan movie.

Click the banner in my signature.

Any and all comments are greatly appreciated.
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deletedbyrequest03 at 2:32PM, July 5, 2007
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Your comic is awesome :D

This year, school's full of BS!!!
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Rhykker at 3:00PM, July 5, 2007
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Thanks a lot, mate!
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Redemption at 4:21PM, July 5, 2007
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It's going to take me a while to read through all your comic but the artwork and the inclusion of animation is fantastic.

I *AM* awesomeness enough to experience Ninja Shizatch!!

*cough*

Updates Thursdays.
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Rhykker at 8:09PM, July 5, 2007
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Thank you very much, Redemption! I hope you'll find the comic to your liking and stick with it.

Also, I see that you, too, use the Dark Crystal font ;)
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Rhykker at 6:18PM, July 28, 2007
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Updated. Check it out, tell me what you think.
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RabbitMaster at 8:16AM, July 30, 2007
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Ok, first things first. I think your comic is clipping along pretty good. There is a definite satirical streak to it and it makes a lot of fun of some of the tried and true conventions of the genre. I like it.
The animation in the panels is something I don't think I've ever seen before. It's a nice touch.
I guess my only complaint (and it's to be expected in a T+ comic, I suppose), is the language is a little coarse sometimes. But overall, a very impressive work.

"Perhaps you would care to try your villany on a less defenseless opponent?"--Kung Fu Rabbit
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dedso1 at 7:10PM, July 31, 2007
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You like ninjas...

Go see my naruto comic ;)...please...
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Rhykker at 4:57PM, Aug. 6, 2007
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Thanks a lot for the critique, RabbitMaster. I really appreciate it.

I hadn’t realized the language was coarse – I actually thought it was nothing worse than what’s seen on primetime TV. But thanks for letting me know.

Today mark’s Ninja Shizatch’s 50th “official” page, as well as the end of Book 2.
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spacehamster at 5:10PM, Aug. 6, 2007
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Rock-solid anatomy, dynamic page layouts, and I'm loving the animated SFX.

One thing I think needs work is the inking - try to get some line weight variation in there, I think it will help making the stuff look even more dynamic. And I'd try cel shading instead of gradients, I think it would befit your style better.

Cool stuff overall, though!
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Rhykker at 12:09PM, Jan. 9, 2008
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Ninja Shizatch is entering its 4th issue. Check it out! Now with cel-shading.
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