Hi everyone.
My name is Paul Lavallee. The Nightbeast Eternal is the new comic I've been working on. It's also my first attempt at maiking a full comic. I'm having a blast making it. I'll be updating every Sunday with a new page. Please check it out and let me know what you think. Critiques are very welcome.
http://www.drunkduck.com/Nightbeast_Eternal/
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[PLUG/CRIT] Nightbeast Eternal
PaulLavallee
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blakechen
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Pretty cool.
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bbr
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Interesting.
Need more pages to give proper critique.
Need more pages to give proper critique.
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PaulLavallee
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bbr
Interesting.
Need more pages to give proper critique.
Thanks guys for checking it out. I'll be adding another page every sunday.
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bbr
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Oh 1 remark though.
You might want to put the comic on "M" for mature instead of "E" due to language use.
You might want to put the comic on "M" for mature instead of "E" due to language use.
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PaulLavallee
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bbr
Oh 1 remark though.
You might want to put the comic on "M" for mature instead of "E" due to language use.
Maybe that's a good idea. Especially with the steamy pages I have coming up! :)
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SheaSummers
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I like the retro comic look it has, I want to see more to be able to fully critique it though.
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PaulLavallee
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I updated with another page today.
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PaulLavallee
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Hey wasup y'all. I updated with another page today. Check it out and let me know what you think. Peace.
http://www.drunkduck.com/Nightbeast_Eternal/
http://www.drunkduck.com/Nightbeast_Eternal/
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PaulLavallee
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PaulLavallee
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PaulLavallee
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Another update. Check it out. http://www.drunkduck.com/Nightbeast_Eternal/
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PaulLavallee
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PaulLavallee
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Updated with the final page of my first story arc. Check it out and let me know what you thought. I appreciate criticism.
http://www.drunkduck.com/Nightbeast_Eternal/
http://www.drunkduck.com/Nightbeast_Eternal/
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swizzle
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Nice clean lines and colour, good sense of background AND also the fact they are stylized in your own way and seem pretty original ^^ I glanced over a few pages, and it seems interesting. I will probably post again when I'm a little less busy and give an opinion on the storyline.
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