threeeyeswurm
Hello. I really like the Cover page. It is simple, fitting and has a nice style. However, it seems you rushed through the rest of the comic. They lack everything the cover page has. The drawing of the characters are nice and retain some of the style of the cover page, but the background and the silhoutte looks sloppy and lack effort. It seems you are not confident at drawing background and gave up on them.
Don't rush through the pages! Take your time, have some patience. If you don't know how to draw something, like the background (which is very difficult and can be detail oriented), look it up. Practice. It always pays off more when you take the time to try to improve.
>.< Thank you for looking at the comic! I'm glad you like the cover page. Thank so much for the input, really, I'll try harder with backgrounds. I didn't spend too much time with MCL, so sad that it shows. I'll dedicate more time to improving it. :)Thank you for the encouragement and critique.
