Hey everyone!
I recently decided to post my comic up on DrunkDuck and I figured I'd come here to plug it and ask for any advice as to what I should do to improve my art/story and to gather more readers. As soon as I posted some pages I realized a lot of them are a little too big, so I'm going to try to make them a little smaller from now on.
The comic can be found here: http://www.drunkduck.com/Metal_Breakdown/
The comic is about a boy named Randy who tragically lost his dad and his own arm in a mysterious accident. Randy now wishes to find out what really caused his father's death and to resume his dad's skilled work with robotics by creating the very first sentient android. He succeeds, but there are still a LOT of bugs to work out.
Thanks for reading!
going away - Hey Everyone Look What I Did!
[PLUG/CRIT] Metal Breakdown
Metal_Breakdown
at 9:57AM, Aug. 30, 2008
(online)
posts: 15
joined: 9-29-2007
last edited on July 14, 2011 1:59PM
Metal_Breakdown
at 4:23PM, Sept. 10, 2008
(online)
posts: 15
joined: 9-29-2007
Just bumping this thread as I have some more recent pages up for critique :D
last edited on July 14, 2011 1:59PM
Aghammer
at 11:48AM, Sept. 11, 2008
(offline)
posts: 1,391
joined: 6-11-2008
Wow, that's nice stuff. I really like your character designs.
last edited on July 14, 2011 10:47AM
Fishfilet
at 12:33PM, Sept. 11, 2008
(offline)
posts: 12
joined: 2-11-2008
It's you! It's yoooooooou
I love your comic also. :}
I love your comic also. :}
last edited on July 14, 2011 12:29PM
Metal_Breakdown
at 8:20AM, Sept. 12, 2008
(online)
posts: 15
joined: 9-29-2007
Aghammer
Wow, that's nice stuff. I really like your character designs.
Thank you very much for looking! :D
last edited on July 14, 2011 1:59PM
Metal_Breakdown
at 8:22AM, Sept. 12, 2008
(online)
posts: 15
joined: 9-29-2007
Fishfilet
It's you! It's yoooooooou
I love your comic also. :}
Aww thanks! I love yours too and I can't wait for more pages! So this is where ya found me huh? ;D
last edited on July 14, 2011 1:59PM
Metal_Breakdown
at 8:39PM, Sept. 23, 2008
(online)
posts: 15
joined: 9-29-2007
Bumping again!
Also Metal Breakdown now updates on a weekly basis on Wednesdays, usually at 3pm Eastern Time.
Thanks for looking!
Also Metal Breakdown now updates on a weekly basis on Wednesdays, usually at 3pm Eastern Time.
Thanks for looking!
last edited on July 14, 2011 1:59PM
fladam
at 2:52PM, Sept. 26, 2008
(online)
posts: 13
joined: 9-11-2008
Cute and dark at the same time. You've pulled that off very well. Nice character art, clean and slick.
last edited on July 14, 2011 12:29PM
Metal_Breakdown
at 9:31AM, Sept. 28, 2008
(online)
posts: 15
joined: 9-29-2007
fladam
Cute and dark at the same time. You've pulled that off very well. Nice character art, clean and slick.
Thanks so much! I really appreciate it =)
last edited on July 14, 2011 1:59PM
Metal_Breakdown
at 2:04PM, Nov. 3, 2008
(online)
posts: 15
joined: 9-29-2007
Quick bump again as the comic is moving along nicely ;D
last edited on July 14, 2011 1:59PM
Metal_Breakdown
at 9:39PM, Jan. 14, 2009
(online)
posts: 15
joined: 9-29-2007
Just gonna bump this... Hope that's okay! >_>
last edited on July 14, 2011 1:59PM
bryan
at 10:22AM, Jan. 15, 2009
(offline)
posts: 99
joined: 6-5-2007
I suggest you put a link in your tag (so people on the forums don't need to click through your profile just to take a gander at your comic). As for your actual comic though, I thought it had some very clean lines and clean colors. Nicely done ;)
last edited on July 14, 2011 11:35AM
Metal_Breakdown
at 11:22AM, Jan. 15, 2009
(online)
posts: 15
joined: 9-29-2007
bryan
I suggest you put a link in your tag (so people on the forums don't need to click through your profile just to take a gander at your comic). As for your actual comic though, I thought it had some very clean lines and clean colors. Nicely done ;)
Hey thanks a lot!! I added a banner, hope its not too annoying haha =)
last edited on July 14, 2011 1:59PM
©2011-2012 WOWIO, Inc. All Rights Reserved
