Its a fantasy/adventure type story about a gnome who is forsed to leave his home and find... well dont want to spoil it for you.And some crit would be great... http://www.drunkduck.com/Long_path_to_freedom/index.php

Okay, here's what I got to say.

1. Clean up the comic. The whole thing is just messy and for eye-candy whores, it's depressing to look at a page like that. Also, your pages are lopsided, try and fix that. Makes everything look orderly.
2. Looks like you have a good story, and that's what counts in the beginning.
3. Work on the character art. That's what matters too. You can lack good backgrounds and all that other crap, but if your characters don't look good, it's almost hopeless.
4. If you want a good program to fill in backgrounds with, use this. (I hope that takes you to the website I think it will)


For now, that's all I notice is wrong. If you can fix all of that later on, then we can move on.

2nd page is up.

I tried to fix all that stuff you've pointed...