Hiya! I'm kind of new-ish to Drunk Duck and I've never wandered around these forums before. So...
...here's my comic! Please critique...or just read it. Whatever floats your pita bread.
It's sci-fi-ish and humorous !
Lexcore
Enjoy !
going away - Hey Everyone Look What I Did!
[PLUG/CRIT] Lexcore!
MuriraRK
at 2:51PM, Nov. 27, 2006
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MuriraRK
at 1:30PM, Jan. 2, 2007
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So...I bump. ^_^'
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Darth Mongoose
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It looks nice, but could you give us 'back' and 'next' buttons? It'd make it a lot easier to navigate your comic, which would get you more readers.
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MuriraRK
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Sorry. ^_^' You must've looked in on it while I was editing the template. Eheheheh. It should be working now. ^_^
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MuriraRK
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February bump!
First chapter is finished! Please crit/bash/whatever?
First chapter is finished! Please crit/bash/whatever?
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Rydel6
at 2:14AM, Feb. 4, 2007
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I just finished reading the entire first chapter. I really liked it. I liked it alot! Especially how you made fun of Earth Cartoons.
The story felt a little rushed at first, but then that's necessary to get to the action, yes? I thought a little more explanation about how things worked and how everyone was associated could have been nice. The reason I ask this is because I don't understand how did a second year get bumped up?
Also, what led up to him being a peeping Tom in the first strip? I understand that he has a crush on Kathes, but how did he get there? Do they live in the same Dorm as the Teachers?
All in all, it's actually pretty good. Now I'm forced to add another person to my fav list.
Can't wait to see more! ^_^
Rydel6
The story felt a little rushed at first, but then that's necessary to get to the action, yes? I thought a little more explanation about how things worked and how everyone was associated could have been nice. The reason I ask this is because I don't understand how did a second year get bumped up?
Also, what led up to him being a peeping Tom in the first strip? I understand that he has a crush on Kathes, but how did he get there? Do they live in the same Dorm as the Teachers?
All in all, it's actually pretty good. Now I'm forced to add another person to my fav list.
Can't wait to see more! ^_^
Rydel6
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MuriraRK
at 11:26PM, Feb. 5, 2007
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Haha, the rushed-ness was just because of bad planning on my part. I'm working on a proper prologue right now that should maybe work out better than the first chapter.
The second-year thing with them getting bumped up is a story thing that I'm going to get into later. The same goes for the peeping Tom bit , except that one is more because of that bad planning bit. Hahaha.
So...yeah, I've got all the stuff you mentioned in mind. ^__^
Thanks for reading it! <3 Yaaay, someone faved meeee!
The second-year thing with them getting bumped up is a story thing that I'm going to get into later. The same goes for the peeping Tom bit , except that one is more because of that bad planning bit. Hahaha.
So...yeah, I've got all the stuff you mentioned in mind. ^__^
Thanks for reading it! <3 Yaaay, someone faved meeee!
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MuriraRK
at 1:09PM, Feb. 28, 2007
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I have a spiffy colored page ! And the prologue started! Whatchu guys think?
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