Lacerated Veil is a comic I have been doing since New Year 2007. It's at 72 pages, and I update around once a week.

It's a strip about a stick figure named Richardo (the H is deliberate) and the many horrors he faces daily. Please give me criticism.

One thing:

I won't change the badly translated Spanish, it's something I decided to do mostly on a whim but now feels too deeply embedded in the comic to change it. I also love doing it. If the joke requires a translation, I'll translate it or make it REALLY obvious.


Go ahead.

http://www.drunkduck.com/Lacerated_Veil/

i like your work, the spanish problems are not a problem for me anyway, in fact i find it interesting to see the linguistic development in both languagues, plus, stick figures rule (i'm not being sarcastic)

Pandafilando
i like your work, the spanish problems are not a problem for me anyway, in fact i find it interesting to see the linguistic development in both languagues, plus, stick figures rule (i'm not being sarcastic)

Yay!

I really like it. Subtle humor (that some might not get), in a nice style that goes beyond just stick figures... sort of like kris at Explosm. I also really love the Spanish, being one of my favorite languages and all. I studied it for 8 (my Gods, now I feel old) years, so I understand it