6 teenagers after acquiring weapons called Emblems through the means of blood alchemy, a way to sacrifice blood and souls that is similar to alchemy, goes out at night almost everyday to hunt vampires. But then strange things starts to happen such as a strange door in the basement of the school where a coffin lies inside. An armored vampire and more shall happen.

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LINK : www.drunkduck.com/knights_requiem

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Bump again =( please comment and critique

well, if 2 bumps doesnt get you a comment then nothing will!

ok here goes...


INK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

this begs to be inked like a hungry child outside of a restaraunt. the art looks like you did it in 5 minutes a page.

your style is very likeable, this could go somewhere...but it needs to be more finished. pencils against an obviously photoshop colored night sky looks wrong.

i didnt get a chance to read the whole thing yet so i cant comment ont he story.

Well, I'll try to give you some advice

First, like the above poster says: Ink it.
Second, when looking through the pages I see no backgrounds... I know thye can be tricky and it takes some extra work, but if you're trying to do something that is not a Shoujo comic (where backgrounds consist mostly of weird brush patterns) as well as cause confusion to the reader, I suggest you grab a ruler and start putting in trees and houses.
Third, as for the story? I read through most of it, but I kind of lost interested already through the description. It's obviously manga/anime influenced by FMA and the whole "collect" storyline's been done so much that it mostly applies to 6 year olds who's never stumbled upon the genre before (I'm not saying it's a bad thing, just not what I would want to read). Also, Vampires? Another thing that's been done a million times. So instead of fusing everything that's been done before, maybe you should re-think your approach (on the story) until you actually get a good and unique idea

I know sometimes you just want to CREATE, but if you haven't spent much time on coming up with something, it gets messy and boring

I wish you good luck in the future, though

i belive this would be better if you could put more detail, all pages look like sketches, if you take the time to ink them and possibly digital tone them it could be much better.

Well yeah, I started digital toning them around chapter 8, and if you look at chapter 9 you can see backgrounds www.knights-requiem.smackjeeves.com ^_^. Chapter 1 to 4 are very old and I don't plan to redo them until I get much better thus the bad look it has. Vampires might be cliche but it' still fun to do, at least for me that is. It's good to know that some can see that it's based of FMA, I'm not too sure what the "collect" story term means so I'll just say that I'll make sure to make it not feel the same as FMA since I have yet to decide on the ending after all, the story's flexible enough for me to change a few important keys as of now. Thanks for the advice though. :P