Hey hey hey! :D
So I'm here to plug my comic and get constructive criticism. However, when it comes to crit here are some things I'd prefer you not mention due to it being oversaid and all that: the skinnyness of my characters ...and thats about it XD.
Also, if you're going to say "work on the anatomy" please tell me if I need to work on it OVERALL or if there's certain body parts that are more whacky than others.

One more thing, The art in the first two chapters is HORRID and I know that XD. So if you're going to crit I'd prefer it to be from Chapter 3 and onwards.

ANYWAYS here's the link :D http://www.drunkduck.com/Jack_Frost_My_Love/

Now that i've jabbered your ears off I look forward to your comments and crit :D

Hey, read through your comic and was impressed all around. The only suggestion i can make is to try to limit the self deprecation in your personal comments. You have a good comic going.

Keep it up

Druss01

Druss01
Hey, read through your comic and was impressed all around. The only suggestion i can make is to try to limit the self deprecation in your personal comments. You have a good comic going.

Keep it up

Druss01

LOL I think that's the nicest crit/comment i've ever gotten XD. I'm glad you like it!! Thank you so much for reading<33. And I will try to lower the whole "ew i suck" kinda think haha.

I do agree, the self-deprecating comments can work against you so avoid that no matter how bad you think it looks. Since you did mention anatomy, the main part to work on would be the arms and shoulders (too square). You should also work on making your female characters a bit more feminine. I'm not saying to make them look stereotypical or anything, but I did mistake Eliza for a boy at first. If you put some effort into all of that to help compliment the writing (no problems there), you should have a decent webcomic.

BlkKnight
I do agree, the self-deprecating comments can work against you so avoid that no matter how bad you think it looks. Since you did mention anatomy, the main part to work on would be the arms and shoulders (too square). You should also work on making your female characters a bit more feminine. I'm not saying to make them look stereotypical or anything, but I did mistake Eliza for a boy at first. If you put some effort into all of that to help compliment the writing (no problems there), you should have a decent webcomic.

Awesome, thank you for the advice!! A boy huh? LOL. I think that's just cause I can't draw boobs hahaha I need to work on that too XD.

I didn't think she was a boy but I can see where it would be a problem.

Now that I look at it I can definetly see it too LOL. Dangggg I'll have to work on that haha.

Kinda strange how you can be oblivious to something until it's pointed out, in which it then becomes a "why didn't I catch that sooner" moment. It's happened to me before.

Lol, I know man it's kind of irksome. ESPECIALLY when it's something really embarrassing that you didn't notice before until somebody pointed it out!