Just put up a preview of my upcoming series Shadow of Death.
www.drunkduck.com/shadow_of_death



Please check it out and let me know what you think.
Thanks

Wez
inZane Comics

I giggle when I see the Dark Crystal font used... since it was, y'know.

The font from Dark Crystal.

Really, alot of it's... hard to take as seriously as it seems to want to be. Your main character looks a bit like Ben Stiller doing a Hugh Jackman impression with Sting facepaint. Phrases like "Know why lightning never strikes twice..." are a bit campy for this day and age. Really, alot of it feels way too mid-90's "Xtreme" for me. You seem to have a pretty solid grasp on whatever modelling program you use, though, and some of the females are good looking. I guess that counts for something.

Eh, not something I'd be too interested in delving further into. It's not terrible or anything, but... it comes off as a little obliviously dated, maybe to the point of being pretentious.

Okay so I know there have been alot of people lookin' at the book, but I would really love to hear what you think of it. Good or bad. The only way to grow and improve is to hear from the people.

Thank you to all who have and are going to look at it.