A new comic written by me and drawn by Liz, which after a few pages seems to already be proving itself to be an attractive comic to many, and that's with barely any advertising at all. Two boys are sitting in a diner, awaiting their meals and while they do, they have... pleasant conversations.

I would love it if you visited the comic through the link in my sig and gave your views on it either here or there. Either one is good.

Hey that's pretty funny and clever. The intro was very clever and a good attention grabber for an intro.
(I'm not very experienced with critiquing)
Your well on your way! Keep at it!
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