http://www.drunkduck.com/Hotaru/index.php
Yeah, I finally figured that I had enough pages for you guys to get a basic idea of what you do and don't like about this.
I'm always looking to improve, and would love some constructive critisism!

I haven't quite gotten far enough to dive into the real plot, but how do you like the characters so far? Keep in mind that they aren't meant to be heros. (villains would probably be the more correct term...)
Any advice is welcome!

Updates are every monday and friday.